We were given around ten to fifteen minutes each to talk through our response to our chosen brief, and told that the feedback must not be about changing the content or design of it as there are time constraints, that it must be about the response in general and what could be included to improve it.
The feedback I was given:
Strengths
- The type used on the inside of the packaging is effective
- Good use of packaging
- Really strong concept
Areas for Improvement
- Experiment with fading out the type pattern on the front of the menus
- Consider working with more of the photography - it works really effectively
Overall the feedback was positive about my response to the brief, with everyone seeming quite enthusiastic about the concept and about the work I had done for it. I think the feedback given as definitely helpful and the points made will improve my final printed outcomes.
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